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[Sheesh]

firstly, this was... interesting and unorthodox indeed.
You could improve this game by having some UI and menu stuff (like a main screen and credits or smth)

I really love the color and the strange concept tho!

marui32 responds:

Thought about adding a menu and stuff but I wanted to keep it simple. Might update it to make a UI with credits and some options for difficulty
Thanks for the feedback!

[3D Marbles and Slides]

Reasons why this game is not gud:
1. The Menu is bad
2. I Have no idea what to do.
3. There is no start screen or anything.

How To Improve:
1. Add a start screen with buttons like Play, About and Controls.
2. Make better menus, the easiest things to do would be to add a background, get a free font (You can get free fonts from a place called fontspace.com, and tick commercial use) and make colorful buttons.

What You May Say:
"I put the controls in the description"
Well, It is better to have the controls in the game as well.

Please fix the problems I pointed out in this review,
Cheers,
MST_Creator